Board Thread:OC Discussion/@comment-24947676-20151209182748/@comment-24947676-20151209192511

Skittylover3 wrote: Skittylover3 wrote: CrystaltheCool wrote:

Skittylover3 wrote:

CrystaltheCool wrote:

Skittylover3 wrote:

CrystaltheCool wrote:

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CrystaltheCool wrote:

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CrystaltheCool wrote:

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CrystaltheCool wrote: slaughty (I think you mean "slutty".) i ment slaughty as in slaghter her other personality Oh. In that case, why does she even have two personalities? So she can be edgy? :/ to souls in her body fighting for control = to an outsider she seems bipoler WHY are there two souls in her body? It makes no sense at all. it came into her body while she was on the streets How and why did it come into her body? Again, the backstory you came up for her is just plain stupid and overly cliche. to have a new body it can't just go to its old body it would be unable to move and just rot  There isn't any evidence that dead souls can enter new bodies. They either become ghosts or use their power to create a body for themselves to live in. There is no evidence suggesting that they steal bodies. there is no evidence saying that it can't happen i do this to have fun  So you don't want to improve at all? i do but i can't im me  i usually type things up in a single day plus i don't really need it they don't seem to dislike me at all i get that some people overthink things & for her backstory how else do i explain sakura hato i dont have the keys to wright her real name its pink heart  In that case, I suggest putting a bit more thought into your OCs. The reason the canon wiki doesn't mind is because their rules are too loose. We here on the other hand actually care about the quality of OCs.

Also, the Japanese word for Heart is Kokoro. Please learn how to use google. one thing is pinku is not on the wiki the backstory is to explain why she takes things into her own hands and i am not a part of the fannon wiki why should i care i checked google translate it said hato their are two japanese languiges i think i use google it said pinku hato im sorry but she exists for a rp and i don't think she is a bad mary sue why is it so bad when you don't normally fight and you are not that strong they won't kill your characters unless your character is bad at fighting? just review the other oc's Alright, sure, I shall continue with this series of reviewing your OCs tomorrow. Your lyism (Lying about having autism in order to use it as an excuse for things. Most autistic people are actually very intelligent, not having the shittiest grammar in the universe.) amuses me.