Thread:Yoshafire/@comment-34921578-20170119235313/@comment-31186640-20170125032734

Sure!

Kanna's name is fine, but I suggest that instead of describing her hairstyle as cute, you say something along the lines of "many of her peers find it to be a cute style". It should be the reader's decision whether or not they find it attractive.

I'd to correct the kanji and romaji sections on her infobox. The kanji section has katakana in it, not kanji. The romaji section also has a mixture of katakana, romaji, and what appears to be kanji. I can tell you that her romaji would probably be "Kaito Kanna", but the kanji may vary. You could either do some research or leave it blank.

It is said that Kanna Kaito and Minato Akari are related, but that Kanna doesn't remember who she is. How are they related? Are they long-lost relatives? I suggest you make that a bit more clear.

Her Persona is interesting and seems like it would be challenging in-game, but her personality is a tiny bit bland. She seems like a typical anime girl. Maybe give her some more flaws and unique traits, to make her a bit more interesting?

The reason she's not nearly as popular as Hiroyuki Akane may be because she doesn't have as interesting of a personality and backstory. Kanna is still a pretty good character overall, however!