Talk:Xavier Munroe/@comment-27110782-20160429112913/@comment-26187158-20160429113859

I'm not gonna take the cop picture out. It's a...memory of an old user. One of the only memories, in fact.

Xavier and Munroe aren't french names? Really? I found Xavier in a french name generator and it sounds like a cool name.

I know that Japan doesn't accept outsiders.

Xavier's job as a Singer is at a local cafe on weekends. Not at school.

Xavier tends to stay away from managers. He doesn't do the singing for a business yet. He does it for fun and to express himself.

Plus, he only does covers of songs. His friends picked on him because they thought singing was more of a girly thing. That's why he had more friends of the female gender.

As for the candy stuff...Yeah, I can probably take that out. Bit cliche, now that I think about it. Plus, he would dip the bento in chocolate on occasion. It's like fries and ketchup.

Overall, I think this critique is a very handy way for me to improve my character further. Thank you for taking your time to do this, Kuromin.