Talk:Jeong Ji-hee/@comment-26928286-20180710212150

Since Copper asked for reviews on Discord--

Sasuredi is cute, but upon looking at her portrait you would immediately think she was in the occult club. However, her infobox says no club. Is this a mistake or is she not in the occult club? If it's the latter, you should change her design to not have the accessory and to look less like a member in general. Also you should write her appearance, I see it is a WIP but it's always a good idea to have a description of your character? c:

I like her personality. It seems that she's a bit of a tsundere? But, you didn't just go and use this label instead of an actual description, which is good.

Her backstory is strange, her name isn't Korean so I don't understand how she could have been born in South Korea. her parents are originally from Japan but I still think she would have had a korean name probably. But maybe I'm being a bit nitpicky haha? Secondly it doesn't show anywhere in her personality etc that she liked music or sang, played an instrument, anything like that. You should add something like this in there so that her backstory (being in a kpop band) makes more sense.

Finally, her name isn't an actual name, so I would change it if I were you! Maybe to a korean or japanese name. :D