Board Thread:OC Discussion/@comment-24947676-20151209182748/@comment-24947676-20151209191309

Skittylover3 wrote: CrystaltheCool wrote:

Skittylover3 wrote:

CrystaltheCool wrote:

Skittylover3 wrote:

CrystaltheCool wrote:

Skittylover3 wrote:

CrystaltheCool wrote:

Skittylover3 wrote:

CrystaltheCool wrote:

Skittylover3 wrote:

CrystaltheCool wrote: slaughty (I think you mean "slutty".) i ment slaughty as in slaghter her other personality Oh. In that case, why does she even have two personalities? So she can be edgy? :/ to souls in her body fighting for control = to an outsider she seems bipoler WHY are there two souls in her body? It makes no sense at all. it came into her body while she was on the streets How and why did it come into her body? Again, the backstory you came up for her is just plain stupid and overly cliche. to have a new body it can't just go to its old body it would be unable to move and just rot  There isn't any evidence that dead souls can enter new bodies. They either become ghosts or use their power to create a body for themselves to live in. There is no evidence suggesting that they steal bodies. there is no evidence saying that it can't happen i do this to have fun  So you don't want to improve at all? i do but i can't im me  i usually type things up in a single day plus i don't really need it they don't seem to dislike me at all i get that some people overthink things & for her backstory how else do i explain sakura hato i dont have the keys to wright her real name its pink heart In that case, I suggest putting a bit more thought into your OCs. The reason the canon wiki doesn't mind is because their rules are too loose. We here on the other hand actually care about the quality of OCs.

Also, the Japanese word for Heart is Kokoro. Please learn how to use google.