User blog comment:PISTACHIOLORD/Oc Reviews/@comment-26890722-20170620140535/@comment-28172979-20170620163436

I HAVE WRITTEN THIS OVER THREE TIMES SO THIS IS GONNA BE VERY BRIEF

Originality: 9/10

Just wow.

Appearance: 3/10

So many ocs lately have the same red hair and hairstyle and red eyes. I feel like maybe you should change that decent trend up a bit and maybe try to edit and add to his current appearance.

Backstory. 5/10

fUCK YOU AND yOUr deprEsSIng AsS bAcKStORiES This backstory has just the amount of " yes suffer." and "no my poor boi" in it to make it so uniqe in a different wAY. However so many ocs nowadays all have depressing ass ocs that were abused.I know its a serious matter but it shouldnt be abused in this way.

Personality: 3/10

Okay i find his personality wonderful and shit but I dont feel like the kind part fits him. I mean, this kid has been abused for most of his lif3 and he had to witness his brothers death first hand. I mean, he must be really good at smiling and hiding shit if he isnt fased after all of that. I feel like the slueth part fits him tho. I feel like you should update the personality sectionb more. I think personally that its outdated in a way because ive seen teh rp spam on the recent activity and i have realized that his personality is slightly different from what is stated on the page.

Overall: 8/10