User blog comment:PISTACHIOLORD/Oc Reviews/@comment-32388900-20170620172156/@comment-28172979-20170622104309

Originality: 6/10 The Oc is very original though there are lots of abusive parent ocs out their due to the amount of ocs on this wiki that have been abused. The number is growing rapidly rip.

Appearance: 7/10 I feel that almost all male teachers or adults have the exact same face due to their only being on male base really for adults. However the yellow eyes and red hair is a very nice touch to the creativity because their are rarely any ocs that have that kind of physical features. At least adult ocs. Reminds me of 707 from Mystic Messenger if he wasn't dang abusive to Mason and was younger and more of a dank meme.

Backstory: 2/10

I'm going to be honest here, the backstory and story in general here is really fucked up. It makes me feel really awkward and weird and I don't think something that dark and disgusting should be brought into this game even though the game is kinda weird too. Mason and his father having a relationship that was sexual when Mason was simply a teen and Eisuke was like, what, in his 20's? That reminds me, if Mason is 17-18(?) and Eisuke is 28 now, that would mean he and his wife has Mason when they were fucking 10 or 11. That's disgusting. Please do something to this.

Personality: 4/10

I like how he's trying to change and all but I find it so cliche. So many movies and games have this where a damn character does some really bad shit and had a really bad old personality and than feels bad and wants to change it. I also don't feel that his personality really fits him in a way.

Page Set Up: 6/10

I feel like you should make a separate page for the gallery and code because it just makes the page feel really crowded and cluttered.

Overall: 4/10

Please fix the age. I refuse to see an Oc who has had a child with another person at the age of 10 or 11 or any age near that