Talk:Kyoko Mikami/@comment-26187158-20151228180800/@comment-26928286-20160104200647

Kyoko isn't actually that horrible compared to all the awful OCs on the wiki. And given how much I detest some users here, I really can't say I hate you at all. But honestly at this point I give no fucks what any of you guys think of me, I'm sick of this wiki and I quit for a reason.

I understand that Kyoko is very important to you, but there is a point when someone becomes too attached to their OCs and ends up ruining them. There was this one girl on another site who made her character into an angel who could never feel sadness and had virtually every power in existence and once my character called her grumpy she pretty much fell into a rage. I was much more angry with her and her OC.

And lol when the hell did I say you were a nasty, bad user and all your OCs were horrible? Marcella White I actually really like, your OC's designs are gorgeous. It's only Kyoko who made me cringe to death. Her design was pretty but her profile was so Sueish it just killed me.

If you care about Kyoko and want to improve her so much, i suppose I should give you some tips. With you redoing Kyoko's profile over and over again, I think you need them

1) Don't base Kyoko off Madoka Kaname, after I watched Rebellion she became my most hated character ever and pretty much ruined the franchise for me. She's a massive Mary Sue.

2) Give Kyoko a more complicated personality than just "shy". Shy is a good start, but certainly not an entire personality. I imagine Kyoko being a really shy and nice, introverted and polite Meganekko, like Retasu from Tokyo Mew Mew.

3) If she's a Yandere Simulator OC, make her look that way. Old Kyoko's deisgn made sense in this world, new Kyoko doesn't really. Remember: unless your OC is a rival she'll have a normal uniform, and a normal hairdo.

4) No tragic backstory and if you decide to keep it no mental disorders please. i have anxiety and whenever I see an OC with anxiety portrayed incorrectly I feel like shooting myself, don't make people with real anorexia and insomnia feel offended.