User blog comment:PISTACHIOLORD/Oc Reviews/@comment-32309504-20170620223133/@comment-28172979-20170622120306

Originality: 8/10

I believe most of this Oc is very original however their are some things on this Oc that have become very very popular lately, maybe you took inspiration from them or the ocs?

Appearance:9/10

This ocs appearance is wonderul. I enjoy how she's not the perfect body shape like most female ocs on this sinful wiki. I really enjoy how she's short and slim and not the perfect height either. I hate when those ocs are made. I love her appearance so much tho. Cutie

Personality: 5/10

I couldn't fully rate this one because only the persona is complete and the personality part is a work in progress. I feel like you could add onto the persona because it feels like you went to the persona page and copy and pasted it onto your own. I feel like you could expand on the persona.

Backstory: -/-

Back stories make ocs better!

Page Set Up: 9/10

I love the way you made the page Set Up! The only concern I have is that you should probably make a separate page just for her gallery and if added 100 questions so it doesn't clutter the page.

Overall: 9/10