User blog:Yoshinoka/Kisekae: The Good, Bad & Ugly - REVIEW 2

hello again! today i will be reviewing atsuko (top) and tomoko (bottom) from Pug Senpai. let's start with atsuko!

i think her hairstyle is relatively cute. i dislike the lack of borders on the bangs and really the bangs in general, but i do think the color looks pretty and the overall style is adorable!

i think you did a great job choosing the colors for atsuko. all of them are the perfect amount of brightness. the only thing i dislike about the color choices is the eyes! the shade of blue is not a good choice. it is far too bright, maybe tone it down a little?

the uniform looks nice from what i can see. the thing that i am most bothered by is the nose. i can barely see it, and when i look closer i find that it is rather big! make it darker and smaller and then it will look nicer.

overall, she is good! there are still some things that could be worked out but i like her!

i really, really don't like tomoko's design. in my opinion the curly hair doesn't suit the rest of her and the neon color is an eyesore. i mostly dislike the look of light hair over dark skin unless it is done right. also, the eyebrows don't match at all and the uniform is not a good choice. for the uniform i think you should make it look closer to one of akademi's actual uniforms and perhaps add a tie. the final verdict for tomoko is...ugly. i definitely prefer atsuko. for tomoko i think you should keep the face but completely rework everything else. good luck!