User blog comment:KuuderessioPlusvalín/What do you opine about my ocs?/@comment-24651308-20170719195343

Aku Shitsu- Her last name is Shitsu, that's amazing. She's very edgy but I still like her (probably cuz of the edge whoops). You should try and give her a reason she's violent and acts cute rather than just liking it, just try not to have it be an terrible tragic backstory. I read a bit of her 100 questions annnnd.... it's really cheesy. Also, running around school with a knife, if she was caught that should have gotten her into a ton of trouble.

Mikata Sisters- One, you should have separate pages for them rather than one page. I like them, but they need more personality than just gossiping! They remind me a bit of the Basu sisters and Catty and Bratty from Undertale.

Kanono Borei- I get you're trying to make her mysterious, but she's just boring. There's nothing about her that really makes me like, or even dislike her, she's just boring and there's nothing that would make me want to find out about her. If you're going to make a character like this, they need to have something for the reader to become interested in and want to know about. Also, eye-patches are pretty cliche now.