Talk:Saikono Megami/@comment-26537094-20170626045357/@comment-27541663-20170627064913

You see this gorl?

At first glance she looks like a sue- Innocent, popular, great at cooking...

By she has just as many negative traits/enough for her to not be a sue. That's how you pull off a borderline sue. This OC on this page? ONE flaw. ONEEEEEEE. and from what I see, you aren't an experienced writer, so you won't be able to pull this off. Sorry, Hun.