Thread:Porcy/@comment-30585047-20170828025944/@comment-26928286-20170828052911

Ahh I'd be happy to give you a lil critique :>

She's not a Sue, she has a pretty balanced personality and she looks pretty good overall!! I do, however, think she could use a few more interesting details. Right now, Amaya seems like just a typical schoolgirl, but if you added a bit more depth to her personality it would make her stand out a lot more.