Thread:Porcy/@comment-5226524-20151129191512/@comment-26928286-20151129204019

First of all, I strongly advise you not name your OC "Candy". ._. Maybe the Japanese word for candy (Kyandi) would be okay, but certainly not just Candy.

Also, how can you be half dandere and half deredere? They are conflicting personalities. Deredere means you show your sweet side all the time, while Dandere means you only show your sweet side to people you are friends with. How can you do both? >.< You need to explain it better.

Her design seems legit, not to mention pleasing to the eyes. Good job on that. :3

I don't think this is neccesarily a Mary Sue, but it is a horribly developed character. There's a lot you need to work on. :<