Thread:Porcy/@comment-32625947-20171015122435/@comment-26928286-20171015161426

=D SHE'S ADORABLE!!! I remember being nasty to you about your OCs in 2015 (I was like twelve back then) and i'm really really sorry about that.

Junko's page is well-written and she's generally a great character who would fit perfectly in Yandere Simulator, but the one thing I would suggest is giving her design and backstory a  little more """"spice""""?

This is probably just a matter of personal taste, but keeping in mind her "plain" personality, maybe giving her a bun on the side instead of two buns, or a bright eye color would make her appearance a bit more unique in my opinion.

And for her backstory, detailing where she lived, any important events in her life, etc. (Like you did with Kyoko's.)  One thing I've noticed is that her hairstyle seems kind of traditional, so maybe she could also be a  miko   or something like that, and her parents work in a shrine. That's just an idea though, don't feel forced to do that. Despite what I've said before, don't be afraid to give your characters unique traits! Special ≠ Mary Sue.

One other thing I have to point out is the height and weight. I've seen people give their OCs like 30-40 kg and 140 centimeters, which isn't possible unless someone has a serious health problem. Junko's are healthy and make sense for her age. So good job on that.