Thread:Betapekoyama/@comment-8846246-20160414232415/@comment-8846246-20160522162322

...I swear I had posted a reply... It looks good. But kinda looks like she got water dumped on her. Sorry if that sounds rude, I'm trying to describe something and I'm horrible at describing stuff.

I think the problem is the fringe and shine, the fringe looks too loose while the shine is too big. You don't have to change anything about it if you don't want to, it's your OC's sprite.