Thread:LovelyKawaiiSister Aka The Basu Sisters/@comment-31651113-20170207044715

Ok so i finished chapter 1 of Mitti's story and if i made any mistakes then tell me them and plz don't give me crap if i mess up only on a few things k okay then lets get right into it. Also one more thing sorry if my spelling is all wrong.

                                                            Mitti Tashoku

                                                        Day 1

 It was my first day of school and I wanted to get to know everybody but I was just too darn shy, I had seen a ton of eyes looking at me and I heard murmurs too. I wanted to get to know everybody really bad so I had made my decision I was going to go make a friend. I had approached a girl she hadn’t looked like a normal girl, when I approached her I had first noticed that she had big hair. She had long yellow hair that faded into light salmon pink at the tips. I was about to open my mouth to say something but it had seemed that she had heard me breathing behind her. “Hey! Like why are you standing behind me like a weirdo?” I had been completely insulted for her choice of words. “bitch” I scuffed under my breath. I had then approached a girl with purple hair and with two drill pigtails, I had asked “Um hi my name is Mitti I’m new here so um I don’t know what we are supposed to be doing right now so can you please help me” “Well right now we have free time” the girl responded. “Thank you-oh wait! What’s your name” “Kokona!” the girl said sweetly. “Well anyway thank you Kokona” I had then rushed to my locker to get my yaoi manga. I had then sat on a bench under cherry blossom tree’s “It’s beautiful” the cherry blossoms had fallen onto my hair and clothes. I then opened my manga and started reading.



 *time skip* it had been class time. I had rushed to my class because I didn’t want to be late. I had rushed into classroom 1-1 which was my class, I had ranked up my biology to rank 1. I had a bento for my lunch, I had walked all the way up to the rooftop and I was thinking why they didn’t have an elevator. I had sat next to a girl with short sky blue hair and red eyes, I noticed she was reading a book “Hey what are you reading there” she didn’t say a word and kept focusing on her book. I had ignored it and sat my bento on my lap and ate. I had read some of her book while I ate because I left my yaoi and shonen manga in my locker. Lunch time had been over and I hadn’t finished my bento I had got up and my bento had fell out of my lap and onto the floor. “Oh no!” I said. The teacher had come to give me a broom and dustpan. I had cleaned up the mess and went to my afternoon class. I had then ranked up my biology to rank 2. I had then walked home.  