Board Thread:OC Discussion/@comment-27541663-20160826071614/@comment-27541663-20160827033931

Betapekoyama wrote: Bluecats wrote: i reviewed him. he isnt a sue from what i could tell. also nice music choice

Thanks. And do you mind showing/telling me your review of him? His Appearance is memorable. I could pick it out from a crowd if I wanted. But it's not too complex: it's pretty good. I like how the hair is messy. I don't know why but it seems to add to it. As for his name... His name is somewhat confusing (Shiori being a canon name and Shiroi being very similar), but I could certainly memorize it. I couldn't find anything meaningful behind his name, however I noticed it IS very similar to "Shiroba", as stated in his trivia. Overal so far: he's just above average on the sue scale. Very memorable if you visit his page often. As for his Background, it isn't the most developed however it highlights a few important points which is key to a good backstory. If the backstory were a bit more detailed or longer it would be better, however the current isn't bad. His status is good aswell! He has a fair amount of relationships, however he is more biased to having negative relationships, however with good reason. I can't find any overly-sue traits but he still seems memorable. I give him a 4/10 for memorability. His name is confusing, which is the main reason for the score not being perfectly in the middle (5.0). Oh also I score OCS with 0-3 (Un-memorable), 4-6 (rather balanced), 6-9 (likely a sue), and 10 (definitely a sue).