Board Thread:OC Discussion/@comment-27265959-20151209210058



Warning: EXTREMELY SARCASTIC REVIEW

Name: Xavier Munroe ( Not Japanese?..... ok ill let it pass.)

Age: 16

Backstory:  At 5, his house burnt down and his parents died in the fire. (Seems....Not Cliched) Without any home, he broke into Akademi High School and he lived in the Supply Closet. (...... No Police?........ALSO IS HE 5 YEARS OLD WHEN DOING THIS?) When school is over, he would sneak towards the dumpsters to find any leftover food, (STILL NO POLICE OR TEACHER FINDING HIM DOING THAT?) then he sneaks back to the Supply Closet and begins eating. (NO ONE FINDING HIM?!..... )  At 7, he donned a black cloak and became the Black Thorn, stopping drug deals, robberies and rape. (HE IS LIKE 7 YEARS OLD. ) Soon, two police officers adopted him, thus, he dropped his Black Thorn attitude. (SO THAT'S WHERE THE POLICE WERE, ADOPTING KIDS! WELP LOOKS LIKE WE HAVE A BATMAN ON OUR HANDS) When he became 13, he began working as a part time undercover cop. (OK, 13 is not a legal age to BECOME A COP. AN UNDERCOVER COP AT THAT.) 

Apearance:  Wears an old, dirty, slightly torn uniform. Also has a few burn marks on his arms and legs, as well as a scar on his forehead and back. On the back of his neck, he has a birthmark: An X Symbol. (Ok the picture does not seem like this description, also you are missing the whole eye color, hair color, hair things.)

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'''Edge/10. '''Ok...Just gonna  be honest... this is cliched. horribly done and its just.... bad........  