User blog comment:AnonymousYaoiLlama/Osen and Yaoi's YanSim Oc Reviews/@comment-4014806-20160820235715/@comment-28588026-20160821001242

Okay, so, you wrote that she lives in an apartment near the school. How does she pay to live there, it says nowhere on her page that she has a job, where she can make money and take care of herself. And It would take her a while to be come ' Wealthy' from becoming a Youtuber. There might be people better than her. Maybe she wont make that much money. Also, for the love of god, don't make your oc so popular. Popularity, can be a mary sue trait, it all depends on how you interpret it. 'She has a Large fanbase'. 'She has many friends'. Nuh-uh. I don't think so. Not everyone is going to like her and not everyone is gonna be her friend. There are some loners in Akademi that don't really interact with others unless its in a cub activity. And even if it is fanon, don't say that she is the most popular Youtuber in Japan. Just...dont.

Other than that, she is fine.