Thread:Jackboog21/@comment-27419997-20160110183342/@comment-8846246-20160110194903

That's uh, very tall...could you shorten it? It could also use shading. 1 solid color isn't the best. Senpai's hair color should be used for the shading. Here's his portrait for color reference.

Other than it being too tall and lacking shading, it's pretty good. If you don't want to do shading that's fine, but at least make it smaller than an a sky scraper. XD