Thread:Horizonfudgy/@comment-25990213-20160104163502/@comment-24651308-20160107010930

Name: Akai Daiyamondo

age : 17 

Crush : haruto yuto 

Club : unkown(This will be changed) 

Class : 2-3 

Persona : violent social butterfly (a social butterfly but if you gt close to them while covered in blood holding a weapon the will attack you if far away from them they won't attack you) 

strength : fights back strong  

'''personality : She is a tsundere she uses violence to answer just about all her probloms if she witnesses murder she is going to tell everyone who did it. She will antagonize the murderer. she will often beat up people when mad at them. she is quick to anger and has low tolerance for stupidity she cannot take a joke and takes everything literally she loves punching things, lighting small fires and extinguishing them (she thinks fire is the most beutiful thing in the world) fluffy dogs, and guys that like sowing. she becomes dere at the mention of things like kissing haruto or other things. her familly adopted pinku and aoi and thus both of them became her adoptive sistors her half sistor is Gurīn kurabu '''

This was a little hard to read since you don't use periods.... Your grammar and spelling are sorta bad too. If you're on mobile you should get autocorrect, or just look up words in a dictionary.

I like the violent social butterfly persona!

Is there any reason she has high strength? If she isn't in the martial arts club or a sports club then I don't think it'd be logical for her to have high strength.

I'm a little confused, you said first if she see's someone covered in blood and carrying a weapon that she would attack them if they were close. But then you said if she see's someone commiting murder she'd tell everyone. Why does she have two different reactions to similar things?

"she becomes dere at the mention of things like kissing haruto or other things"

She becomes dere?.... Don't you mean yandere or tsundere?

She is sorta bland. I like some things like the violent social butterfly persona, but it's sorta confusing.