User blog comment:PISTACHIOLORD/Oc Reviews/@comment-30886488-20170621163941/@comment-28172979-20170622121602

Originality: 6/10

Lots of this Oc are what basic nice rivals have. I believe maybe changing her up a bit personality wise and in other ways as well.

Appearance: 7/10

GODAMN IT SHES SO ADORABLE

I LOVE HER

Okay, the only concern I have here is that her hair style is basically one that is taken out of the game with no other edits but you adding the bow. I believe that you could add more things but keep her appearance somewhat similar to what it is now. Cutie!

Personality: 5/10

As I said earlier, she has the basic nice rival personality and persona. She has some differences but I believe that you could add more. She's also kind of leaning towards the Mary Sue side of things because she's all nice and so many people like her as well as that she is very intelligent. I suggest putting her though the Mary Sue test.

Backstory: 4/10

As I said earlier, I find her still a bit of a Mary Sue even more after reading this. Also how does one be kind and shy? How does one be kind and only have one friend?

Page Set Up: 4/10

I honestly find the page very cluttered due to the exstensive amount of writing and images on it. I suggest making a separate page for the gallery and a separate page for the 100 questions so that the page seems more clean.

Overall: 5/10