Talk:Rouia Kohler/@comment-24651308-20170429030834

Firstly her design is really cute, I like all the bandages and you have a cute kisekae style. I appreciate that since she has so many images you made a separate page for her gallery.

The page feels really cramped because you don't separate large amounts of text into paragraphs, doing this would make the page much easier to read. You also should put a space after a comma to improve how easy the page is to read and also the grammar.

It's often a common trope that OCs know about Yandere-chan's love for Senpai and that she's a yandere, putting more detail and expanding on the relationship could make this better even if it's overused. Since Rouia is a threat to Yandere-chan, having elimination ways makes sense and the ones you've came up with are cool!

Like with another page I reviewed this page is very long and detailed making it quite a long read and since the grammar isn't the greatest it's not so easy to read. Again I really like that you made separate pages for things that are long like her gallery and 100 questions.