Board Thread:Roleplay/@comment-26684445-20151221232809/@comment-24947676-20151222102056

LenLawliet wrote: CrystaltheCool wrote:

LenLawliet wrote:

THELEGENDGIANTDAD wrote: LenLawliet wrote: Chrys smirks. T:" Only 10 more minutes til my "Friends" arrive and blow this place to bits" (Dude, your comment is invalid. Chrys didn't know about the ship before it came, no one did. He did not sit around and plan to fucking rape Ai on a space ship ahead of time.) (WTF? He's not capable of rape.

(This was sorted in chat a while ago, Legend. Because of Len's shitty writing skills, he meant to say Chrys wanted to kill Kimiko because Ai was locked in another room where she couldn't see (but that wouldn't work because SHE HAS EARS), and I misinterpreted his shitty writing) (My writing shitty? Nah, your just a tsundere baka that only cares about herself and blames everyone else for your mistakes.)

(Here, I'll copy-paste my explanation for why your writing is shit from the chat. For one, it would be impossible for Chrys to know that the spaceship existed beforehand, so he couldn't have had friends ready to blow it up for him. Second, it would be impossible for Chrys to be capable of killing Kimiko even if Ai was locked in another room (which couldn't have happened due to events beforehand), because Ai could easily hear stabs and screams. Third, during the "I love her more" segment, it would've been impossible for Ai to have ended up locked in another room when it segwayed into the fight scene between Kimiko and Chrys, as they were all in the same room at the time. So how could Ai magically teleport into the locked room, ehhh?)