Thread:Yoshafire/@comment-28664023-20170202211549/@comment-30840516-20170202213005

Sure!

First of all, the name seems alright. It is clearly not Google Translated. Her design is cute, and ehr body type and height are normal and healthy. Heterochromia also isn't that unusual in the Yan Sim universe, where rainbow color-changing eyes are possible, so I won't criticize you for that.

The personality is consistent and it makes sense, but I would like to give a tip (not that this OC needs it, just giving advice)! A personality is not just a general concept, like a dere archetype. It is made up of many different mannerisms and traits. When writing about your character in an RP or fanfiction, their personality traits decide everything they do. Try answering  questionnaires about your characters, to flesh them out and develp more complex and realistic personalities.

I've actually never seen an OC with Horner's Syndrome! It's a pretty good explanation for her eye, and it also makes a pretty unique and interesting trait.

I don't have much elsem to say about this OC. It's an interesting character that I wouldn't be surprised to find in the game itself. Good job!