User blog comment:Cybrile/Yandere Sim OC Reviews/@comment-30575510-20170217222310/@comment-34588630-20170222213451

Ok so there are a few things I have to say about her.

Starting off with the backstory it's really overused, I'm sorry. It's far too dark for the world Yansim is in. Maybe the parents are divorced and the mother is just a bad parent? Not really sure but 'abusive parent' backstories are almost always seen as bad.

For her personality, I think it's ok! However the whole "im going to seek vengance for you killing my friends" thing is again, kinda overused. Maybe instead she'll just hold a grudge towards Yandere-chan and leave it at that? Especially since she's a quiet type with the loner persona.

Also with the trivia "She is emotionally strong, seeing how she surpassed all risks of possible disorders, for example Dissosiative Personality Disorder and Post Stress Traumatic Disorder." that's not good at all. However considering that the backstory should be rewritten to be a little less cliche, maybe she wouldn't have the risk of having these? Not sure!

I think she looks cute! But maybe you could change her hair to something that fits her a little more? The two rabbit-y hair ears are a little weird.