Board Thread:OC Discussion/@comment-24651308-20151211225853

My Second review.

This time it'll be of Rin Tsukeru by Swedechef

Physical Description
Grey/black hair that goes down most of his face, he either uses a clip or gel to keep his bangs from getting into his dark green eyes. He has pale skin, to the point where people would call him anemic, and wears a black blazer uniform. (Very unique!)

He's an average height for his age (5'9), and thin. He's not very strong, his only advantage being he knows how to use a weapon and is not afraid to get his hands dirty. This does not mean he wins fights often, he just isn't completely defenceless.

Personality
Rin is by all means as close to a sociopath you can get. The only driving force in his life is finding information about other people, which he's quite good at. While others that share the same talents as him would usually gossip or sell the information to others, he refuses, he keeps the information he finds to himself. He doesn't care about any of the people around him, the closest person to having an actual relationship with him would be his brother, who he confides with. Since he does't care about the people around him he comes off as rude or condescending, since he would rather they just go away. He does show interest in those with some sort of mental/emotional trauma, and enjoys uncovering the truth behind them. He usually is stalking others, or on his own somewhere either sorting through information or reading the occasional novel, which pass the time. He just gets by in terms of grades, largely because he sleeps through most of the classes due to his late night stalking. Would have the 'Evil' personality unless he was interested in the persons affairs at the of a murder. He is a big fan of solving mysteries and taking pictures. ( This is great. Pretty unique, and nicely detailed :D.)

Backstory
Born in the city, his parents were not often home, his mother caring more about her job as a surgeon and his dad was always out of town for business. So it was just him and his brother for his life. He never was able to get along or be like the other kids, who would bully him because he was different, calling him names like damaged or incomplete (think of how Yin from 'Darker than Black' acts, that was him as a child). He eventually told his brother about this problem, who tried to get him to find activities he enjoys alone, which lead to photography. This of course made him take pictures of people, and lead to the obsession of stalking and finding information. Eventually his brother moved out of the house to a place near Akademi high, and Rin, feeling no attachments to his parents, left with him. (It's good to have a different reason for parents not being around in backstories. It does have the parents cliche, but it's still good)

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Swede put a skills part in his page, which is a good idea.

I really like this oc. So far he's pretty good. Nice job Swede :D 