Thread:VintageToast/@comment-32231221-20170622224000/@comment-32398809-20170622224821

Hello!

I'm not exactly a portrait expert, but I'll try my best to formulate an educated opinion on yours!

(I'm going to assume that these two are Amai and Hanako, just to make it easier.)

Firstly, I like how you made Hanako smaller than the default. Amai's blush is very cute, and the hair, colouring and accessory placement in general is very clean.

I only have two questionable attributes to ask about - do you have a particular reason for the white outline around their bodies? Also, Amai's hair feels a little flat, and unnecessarily spiky.

I don't have many objections to these portraits! You did very well, and they look nice and clean.