Thread:Porcy/@comment-30821759-20160313220529/@comment-26928286-20160313233538

Not at all!

Well I like the music, that's for sure. Mettaton is probably my favorite character lol. Anyhow, one of the first things I noticed were her boobs. They look fake and disproportional to the rest of her body, which is skinny af. You should make her hips and chest and possibly waist a bit bigger. Otherwise, the design is okay. Not amazing, but pleasing to the eyes.

The personality disappointed me a bit. Not as much as it would have if Yandere Simulator wasn't a debug build, however, because right now all the canon students have incredibly simple concepts. Real people are more complicated than a single sentence, but that isn't the issue here.

The main problem with her personality is her lewdness. Going into this, I was praying that this wouldn't be another one of those perv OCs, but I was disappointed. What would be extra original is a succubus who isn't perverted, but is instead simply forced to fufill her duty as a succubus and seduce people. That would be very original.

Overall, this character isn't too much of a Sue, but isn't too developed, either. Her personality should be a bit more deep and unique and her design could definitely be improved. Perhaps you should give her a bit of makeup like Sakyu and Inkyu, except lighter and more natural. Also, her hairstyle looks quite odd and even a bit ridiculous. Looking at the portraits below, I think she would look best simply with modified Kokona drills or simple cute pigtails.However, the current hairstyle is more unique.