Talk:Takehiko Asada/@comment-32680701-20180825053246/@comment-29146653-20180825160350

u uuu h i guess think of the smaller details? i still need to work on it but

characters arent just "they are very protective of who they love." or something, they have flaws and stuff, although takehiko is a bad example bc i didnt give him too many flaws

so just try writing more about characters and you'll get there? ? ? ? its what i did