Talk:Saika Momoiya/@comment-33862044-20171208181728

I have nothing against supernatural creatures and I in fact love them, but this one is just lacking. The backstory is unoriginal. There is no reason why she killed her new parents. And isn't suddenly wiping out the fact that she's a demon out of people's memories a bit OP? Just make her an offensive powerhouse and make her eliminate most (if not all) people who know she's a demon. That'd actually be much better. There is nothing original about this character, at all! Nothing stands out! And there isn't really a thing such as a shy tsundere..

Please, just be original with your characters. Make them suddenly turn into an apple because she's a coward, I don't care, just make it original!

I can give you a lot of supernatural advice, and I've made a shit ton of complex supernatural creatures who stand out. Hell, I'll even give you another idea right now: she can grow spikes out of her head.