Talk:Miki Sutoka/@comment-30585047-20171118234919/@comment-27924856-20171127035222

yoyoyoyo i'm not mysti but i hope it's alright if i drop my two cents ;w;

The concept of a rival who's romantically interested in Ayano rather than Senpai is an interesting one even though it's been done before, and being able to use her as a pawn adds another layer into her character, especially if you specify exactly how far she's willing to go and ways this can be used to eliminate her, such as maybe being able to have her kill someone for you and intentionally making it so that she'll get caught doing it. However, giving more insight into why she likes Ayano in the first place would be good as well, giving her motive, thus making her more 3D.

I'm not sure if you already have the reason, since there's already the question of "What even caused her obession with Ayano?", but I could see her liking Ayano solely because of the vibe she gives off. Maybe she sees Ayano as "different from the rest," or maybe it's that Ayano's personality has something that hers doesn't and it just utterly fascinates her. Maybe that rumored abusive family neglected her and she was bullied in the past, and Ayano is the only person who seems to understand her?

Either way, a big part of fleshing out characters is explaining why they do the things they do. Her personality and backstory might be considered sueish on its own, but if you connect it all together I'm sure she'll turn out great. OCs with strong ties to canon characters are kind of difficult to handle, but I could actually kind of imagine a character with a similar role in the game.

Also, her design is adorable! Do you mind if I make a portrait of her sometime? :o