User blog:Horizonfudgy/OC Poll

I'd like some feedback on what you guys think of my pages/OCs. So theres going to be several polls on this blog. You don't have to, but if you would like to please comment. Thanks! My pages don't get much attention so I don't really know how I should fix them.

Poll one; Which do I need to work on the most with my pages?
Which do I need to work on the most with my pages? Grammar/Sentences Structure They need more information

Poll two; What do my OCs suffer from the most?
What bad qualities do my OCs have the most of? Sameface/too similar Not developed enough Bland Appearances Bland personalities

Bonus: Which one is your favorite?
Bonus poll! Which one is your favorite? http://yandere-simulator-fanon.wikia.com/wiki/Kaori_Kitamura http://yandere-simulator-fanon.wikia.com/wiki/Haruna%27s_Delinquent_group/Miu_Kimito http://yandere-simulator-fanon.wikia.com/wiki/Haruna%27s_Delinquent_group/Haruna_Shintani http://yandere-simulator-fanon.wikia.com/wiki/Sohaku_Homan http://yandere-simulator-fanon.wikia.com/wiki/Shiba_Shirahata http://yandere-simulator-fanon.wikia.com/wiki/Haruna%27s_Delinquent_group/Ryo_Hayashibara http://yandere-simulator-fanon.wikia.com/wiki/Mayuka_Umi http://yandere-simulator-fanon.wikia.com/wiki/Ryouko_Hatano Kaya, even though you deleted her Yoru and Ija, even though you deleted them Harumi, even though you deleted her Ikki, even though you deleted him