User blog comment:Demonic BB/Pixel Palace - Prologue/@comment-24947676-20161018204305

wow first person perspective

that's the easiest way to tell we're in for a shitfic

i wonder why on the internet, so many people use first person... all the fics i read on the internet that are written in third person are really good. but in the case of first person, most of the time it's shit.

so i'm guessing yours will be shit too

and yes, i did read it. cliche-filled and boring imho