User blog comment:AnonymousYaoiLlama/Osen and Yaoi's YanSim Oc Reviews/@comment-4014806-20160821003000/@comment-31504968-20160821015842

If you get hurt by this I'm sorry, but I'm just being truthful. I hope she self appointed herself as a Paranormal Investigator, because it's highly unlikely that any adult would believe she met a yokai and sealed it away. Also, how is it that the yokai couldn't just destroy the door the moment she entered the guest-bedroom? And it makes no sense that a random bottle of water could daze a yokai, salt water or holy water could, but not regular water. How exactly did she raise the funds to fix up a gigantic mansion in the deep dark woods? How did she get food? Did she hunt, did she go out and buy groceries, can she even cook? And like before, it's very unlikely that adults would believe a young teen about spirits and the supernatural she'd look crazy or attention seeking. I honestly don't like the "temper of a man but also has the patience of a woman" line, it's a little sexist to deem that men have bigger tempers and women have more patience. I do like how you've made her hide her real talent at sensing the supernatural from the rest of her students. I also like how you connected her to Oka instead of making her Oka's "Supernatural rival." The way you made her judge people is good as well, it shows that she'd rather get her work done properly rather than try to keep up a good rep. "The Holly Man's spirit called the school and had her enrolled, they just dont know he is a spirit, not even info chan." This is pushing it as Info-chan's entire role is to know everything about the people of Akademi."She hates Akedemi Highschool and tries to tell as many people as she can by randomly apearing." Then there honestly wouldn't be any reason for her to come to school frequently. "Sometimes she runs into school because she needs to finishing a important book in the library." Depending on the time, this would be impossible because of the gates."She has a slightly bigger waist then the rest of the female students, this is because she spends eats fried foods a lot and spends most of her time sitting down when there is no paranormal activity." I actually really like this little tid bit, good job! Over all, she's going to need some work.